Monday, June 29, 2009

The First Time We Made Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

Ripples in the water
Lapping at the waters edge
Caressing the pebbles
as they sweep up past
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Lady Grace 05 July 2009

this is smrtly done..the complete thought is abstract..i smiled..grace

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