The First Time I Came Under Fire (Optelic / O*i*f 2003) Comments

An excellent narrative poem. I feel the sentiment of every soldier with the situation like this - war. And thats the consequence in behalf of democracy, there will be a waste of life for hipocrisy. See my poem To The Fallen Angels, and you will know waht is about. This is a great poem and written well.......10

wow 0.o it seems like you've been through alot. It must be horrible to actually see the devastation firsthand. Your narrative poem is excellent! It gives people a different outlook on war through someone else's eyes. (instead of the typical soldier or lieutenant we see an outlook through in your case being a medic. something different) =]

great narrative/poem. you're very brave at the worst of times, i doubt i could ever be.....10

An excellent poem on a very real and a very sad side of humanity. People like yourself have my upmost respect and support. May all our thoughts be with those who are putting their life at risk evey second of every day. Simon