Saturday, June 17, 2023

The First Time Grandfather Comments

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I have been waiting for
this day since the moment
my daughter announced
she's on the family way.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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A beautiful translation of the entire lullaby is shared by poet Premji Premji. The name of the poem is " The Most Beautiful Lullaby Ever Written (Omanathinkalkidavo..) ". Please read..

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I had omitted to translate "Omanathingal kidaavo". These words may be interpreted as "a tiny infant beautiful like moon" or "a little child born to the lovely moon"

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Where have all the comments of my fellow poets gone?

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Pallavi Tripathi 18 June 2023

Wonderful moment put on pen so well. Thanks for sharing

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It is a matter of great pleasure to read your words, dear poet

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Poet David Wood has made a comment on this poems, says an email from PoemHunter. But I am not able to read it here. PoemHunter, do you hear? .? ? Anyways, thank you David

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To be a grandparent in life fulfilled…

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Where have all the comments disappeared? ? ?

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David Wood 17 June 2023

So uplifting grandpa Unnikrishnan, a lovely poem that made me smile.

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Thank you David. I am grateful to you. You always find time to read my works and share your views.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 June 2023

So beautifully and lovingly expressed and presented. I am sure your daughter would be so happy reading this poem. A unique and eternal.gift for a grandchild. Congratulations for a great addition to your wonderful family!

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Thank you Rose Marie. I am happy to read you

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Thank you, Rose Marie, for the exemplary observations

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 June 2023

A grandchild is a crown of a grandparent. May all your hopes and dreams for her be realized. Liked the penultimate stanza that expresses your noble wishes for your beloved grandchild.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 June 2023

What a beautiful tribute to your beloved first grandchild. A poem full of love, happiness, hope and dreams for little Tasha. Wonderful poetic expressions depicting your joy brought by a wonderful grandchild.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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