Sunday, April 1, 2018

The First Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

She lay there in anticipation
Hoping he wouldn't hurt her
But just as he made the first cut
She let out a scream
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Vashita Moondra
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Robert Murray Smith 17 April 2018

A magnificent poem full of emotion and imagery.

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Naila Rais 03 April 2018

A nice write....keep it up... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE too.. Deserves 10 +++ Naila 👍👍😃

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Chinedu Dike 01 April 2018

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. The intricacies of childbirth is captured vividly with clarity of thought and mind in eloquent finesse. Thanks for sharing Vashita and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Vashita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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