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A very feelingly and well-writ piece. Love being the emotion of heart it is often full of pathos, lovely

wow amazing words..! ! interesting sensational poem, love it.. i'm write as well so please check my site too :)

If darkness could vanish, I would say it's finished Because inner and outer I am still feeling your laugh...very beautiful and heart touching

at the first time love came no; swear I'm that none, nothing was there only; me and the love it seems we're the twin dove ........................///

If darkness could vanish, I would say it's finished Because inner and outer I am still feeling your laugh! .. ..so touching

A very touching and passionate write. A great remembrance of a.love.that holds us spellbound. The longings of the heart is vividly depicted in this beautifully written poem of love.

excellent love is depicted every stanza remembrance or your statue the words me or ink of new side by side on the air on the light of sun or moon everything is fair in your disappear I do not fear cause my love brings you to my nerves near

It's hard for me to forget you or I just don't know how to live without you Should I pretend that we never met? So my eyes can stop getting wet? .......heartrendering expression. These lines are bringing the tears of the readers. It is a beautiful poem on love with sadness. The way of presentation is nice and touching.10

sad piercing but beautiful you give life to a memory that could have created a history no w alone you face the tragedy 'tIs will of Almighty nothing can amend it Now let go the past and live on a new life at last for you shall never again from here pass keep the past as a flavour that did not last so now move on to another path forget anger and wrath Have mercy on him let peace not time to you bring Let it go by nothing now can any one do passed is past

Beautiful lines....poignant poetry of one's parting.....a nice write

Lovely lines that are laded with loss and longings!

Beautiful piece, your Love is so proud of you.

It's hard for me to forget you or I just don't know how to live without you Should I pretend that we never met? So my eyes can stop getting wet? tragic experience and how you suffer after years. but i am astonished by your great love. you have a very emotional and loving heart. the simplicity of your poems attract the reader. tony

If darkness could vanish! With these memories of life. Nice work.

Thank you Patricia. Best regards! ! !

Very romantic piece of poetry insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Strong feelings of mighty power of love is well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Rosie. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

A very romantic write. Heartfelt and full of love lines. Good.