The First Time. Comments

Wow, so much power and rhythm in this one (just like the emotion you've captured in here) .

Passionately romantic poetry. Thanks.

This is so graceful and loving, of trying to let go just a little to ease the pain, and yet it rises with the bond...10

Fay, this poem creates a warm glow inside that radiates as you read it. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

A really lovely write Fay full of feeling 10 Daniel

so lovely fay and soft 10