Wednesday, April 1, 2009

The First Time` Comments

Rating: 4.1

The first time
ever
I held you,
so soft
...
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Scarlett Treat
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Ben Gieske 06 August 2009

Very beautiful written. Deserves to be framed and remembered for a lifetime.

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Fortunate lass, you be...Mom, Grandma & Poetess extaordinaire....Now thats a forum worth ensconcing in! Doesen't get much betta' than this...Warm Write! FjR '09

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T McH 11 April 2009

You are much blesed, and we are much blessed to have you here. t x

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Ernestine Northover 05 April 2009

Splendid piece. Joy abounding. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Carmen Johnson 01 April 2009

Good poem, I Like it alot.

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