The First Spring Rain Comments

A concise and descriptive verse nicely crafted with insightful. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Khan.

and see multiple, muscular, liquid verticals lustily fall on Earth that lies supine with all its pores agape. Raindrops, losing the large pelvis for a glorious birth. just wonderful a poem. thank you dear poet. tony

Beautiful! It is how the fallen is ended up in Nothingness.

A great poem like it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, I Fear.