Saturday, December 10, 2005

The First Snowman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Humpty Dumpty went to the Mall
tripped over Santa, had a big fall.
All of the reindeer and Mrs. Claus
dragged Humpty Dumpty into his house.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 17 December 2005

This is excellant poetry. I like how you bring three themes of christmas into one poem. Kimberly

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Ernestine Northover 10 December 2005

I loved this one herbert, I adore Snowmen, and this is a lovely story, and a funny one at that. It made me laugh. Thank you. Love Ernestine XXX

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