Sunday, April 22, 2018

The First Rain Comments

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The parched earth finally had respite
From the heavens came a delightful sight
Dark rain clouds had filled the blue horizon
It covered the burning sky and the blazing sun
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Catherine Habbie
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2018

lit up in all it's green splendour This is the magic of the great outdoors Still more magnificent when it pours As glorious as the lion's roars.....rain in a prached land......... very fine simlies and well articualated poem on the first rain....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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