The First Rain Comments

gurleen, i like that you wrote this without trying to rhyme. this line resonates for me— the sound of thunder Is like that of a cannonade. and i wonder along with you about the gardener. if you're interested, i have a short poem, thunder over downtown denver. glen

The first rain, thunder and its sounds, pouring down from the mighty heavens into my soul and i sense it outside and inside me. Beautiful poem and your innocence and sense of wonder in this poem attracted me. Thank you dear poetss. tony

Gurleen That's what gardeners do (including myself) Gardens are beautiful in the rain Keep writing these good poems Paul

That's a funny one, I like that. You have a good sense of humour.