Sunday, July 8, 2012

The First Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lightning flashes
ripping the sky.
Dark, thick clouds quickly hug to repair the rend.
The winds move cool and fast,
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Anita Sehgal
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Valsa George 28 September 2012

Beautiful! ! The first showers, especially after a scorching summer is such an engrossing experience! You have conveyed the thrill of watching it in such colourful images. I give you a full 10 for the poem! I also invite you to read my poems - Transition and A Sudden Downpour- both on rain..if time allows!

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What a poem! heartfelt congrats. from Subrat

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