Monday, January 13, 2003

The First Night Of Fall And Falling Rain Comments

Rating: 2.8

The common rain had come again
Slanting and colorless, pale and anonymous,
Fainting falling in the first evening
Of the first perception of the actual fall,
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Penguin Meow 15 May 2019

, for beyond the swollen distorted shadows and lights It has to be " FAR beyond" or else the last lines drag off into a stupid fragment... Would you idiots who can please correct this> \? Dang it. If you love poetry, then post it accurately.

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Sharmito 14 May 2019

and it's faintly you fools not fainting You posters cannot read very well.

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Sharmito 14 May 2019

It has to be " far beyond." Do your job.

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Eugnee Boylos 14 May 2019

It has to be “far beyond” for chrissakes doesnt it? Who edits this stuff? Respect it enough to do it right.

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