Wednesday, April 8, 2015

The First Morning Of The Year 2015 Comments

Rating: 3.5

Few hundred geese are flying by
They fly in successive groups,
Each follows the other in specific designs
As they fly, they make loud calls which echo afar.
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NHIEN NGUYEN MD
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COMMENTS
Kim Nguyen 17 June 2016

Beautiful poem! I like very much how you show your feelings through your poem!

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Kimkhue Nguyen 21 May 2016

Please, continue to write your poems. The First Morning of the year 2015 poem is very smooth, when you describe birds, nature, and the first morning of the new year! Good work! Khue

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