Friday, July 22, 2005

The First Lucky Boy To Kiss Your Virgin Breasts Comments

Rating: 4.7

Woman, you are the one who lingers
In my mind with aching tenderness,
But you are hidden in the distance,
Walking through the business world
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Uriah Hamilton
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Adeeb Alfateh 12 July 2019

I would have been That fortunate and karma-blessed boy If circumstance and geography Would have brought me To the wondrous parks and haunts Of your girlhood dreams. ow virginity kisses the entire love great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Jerry Hughes 28 January 2006

Agree with everything said about this stunning poem.11/10 from me...

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Shannon Chapel 30 December 2005

This is a beautiful piece. So sweet and innocent. Well done. S

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J P Klegg 22 July 2005

Good job of 'exposing' the business woman. Liked it. Jeff

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this is a great poem, Uriah. don't you sometimes wish you could tell her yourself? Jake

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 22 July 2005

Such a sweet poem, Uriah!

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Raynette Eitel 22 July 2005

I like this one, Uriah. Wonder if that crisp business woman knows handsome young men are having those fantasies about her. Thanks for this. Raynette

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