Tuesday, December 13, 2022

The First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let's go hand in hand to a strange spot
Secretly, stealthily, without paying heed
To what they perceive and say of us
We'll take a walk in hillsides in pair
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Dr Dillip K Swain
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Pallavi Tripathi 24 April 2023

Brilliant just brilliant. Thanks for sharing : )

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Anjandev Roy 19 April 2023

This is one of Ur best.....love to read time and again....thank u, sir....

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Oh! It's a marvellous piece, filled with the sweet nectar drops of romantic dreams. To my poem list

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Susan Williams 25 February 2023

sounds like a young man in the thralls of young love! MAKES MY HEART SMILE, , Dillip! ! ! 5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 11 January 2023

This is an amazing piece.......wonderful to read.....thank u, sir.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 December 2022

A romantic call. A romantic dialogue

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 December 2022

Such a beautiful write Dillip x Top marks.

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Rob Lamberton 19 December 2022

What a voyage of love…beautiful!

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Dr Dillip K Swain

Dr Dillip K Swain

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