Saturday, March 13, 2010

The First Kiss From You Comments

Rating: 4.8

you said to close my eyes and it was going to be a surprise.
i could feel your arms wrap around my waist and thats when my heart began to race.
i felt your hand touch my face and there was so much going through my mind that i could'nt take.
finally, i could feel your warm breath and i thought my heart was going to pound out of my chest.
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Crystal Garcia
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Manolo Del Toro 16 December 2010

Great write Crystal, very well put together.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2010

liked these lines your intensity and emotion! ! ! when you looked into my eyes, you said you loved me and that forever and ever it would last! thank u for sharing..

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Crystal Garcia

Crystal Garcia

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