Friday, June 19, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

so many
so....so...a many
rang your bell
tapped your door
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Meggie Gultiano 30 June 2009

this is the best write that i have read today..I saw this in a blank white sheet..The greatest point i saw was in a small dot..Lovely write, of course. Hugs, Meggie

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~ Jon London ~ 30 June 2009

Never a blank page when it comes to you Sam....interesting piece bro

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Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

the rhythm in this intriguing poem is fantastic!

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James Mclain 26 June 2009

can not a blank page hold all ever written to bleed it's clean ink aknew..iip

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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Great write Samanyan...10+++

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

Interesting this make one ponder 10s sweet and complex

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Miriam Maia Padua 25 June 2009

interesting...nice idea...thoughts' provoking blank page... a blank canvass... this is a nice piece...not blank after all... impressive... 10++++ lovelots, maia

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Louis Rams 22 June 2009

sometimes the best poetry, is no poetry. because if you really don't have anything to say, why attempt it.

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

Interesting, your poetry is always thought provoking Sam, 10 Lynda xx

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Kesav Easwaran 21 June 2009

Speech could be silver...but silence is gold many a times...the gist in the poem is worth notice...thanks...10

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Sandra Martyres 21 June 2009

A neat satirical piece Samanyan..10

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Ency Bearis 20 June 2009

interesting thoughts...10

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Rakesh Bedi 20 June 2009

Blank pages are looked for by the poets to.......! Yes? !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

Interesting 10

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Carol Gall 19 June 2009

fascinating Samanyan do not know what to say

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wonderful poem friend..hoping all will follow you but some they do not watch what is around..if you are a true poet themn you have to be always consious...well penned..10+++++++++

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Catrina Heart 19 June 2009

Wow! ! ! A poetic satire...He/She had an humble exit, deleted all the finest works offered!

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