Tuesday, June 3, 2014

The First Guava Fruit Comments

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My guava plant had buds, flowers;
I nurtured it with patience great;
I longed to taste the plant's first fruit;
And lo! I saw a fruit unripe!
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Dr John Celes
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Colleen Courtney 06 June 2014

What a beautifully written poem with a valuable message imparted. Nicely done!

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Douglas Scotney 03 June 2014

I've a feeling that third last line can be challenged, John.

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Dr John Celes

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