Tuesday, January 20, 2009

The First For Real Comments

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She walked beside me, as though she was mine,
For the first time in what seemed like years.
She sat beside me and shared chili cheese fries,
As we were bombarded by jealous leers.
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Benjamin Feliciano
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Sonya Florentino 02 December 2009

'True love a rare thing, As uncommon as a foot of snow, At the close of spring'... i like the fresh images in this poem about first love!

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

strong emotions but good restraint in expression. good write

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Benjamin Feliciano

Benjamin Feliciano

Oceanside, CA
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