Tuesday, September 11, 2018

The First Fall Poem Of 2018 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Up late the day before, night blurring into dawn,
too busy with thoughts and rough drafts
to even notice that slow procession of stars
across the Milky Way, that cosmic theater that gave
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Daniel Brick
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M Asim Nehal 18 September 2018

I relate this poem with the passing stages of the life and it keeps on unfolding the moods and the seasons and our way of thinking etc....A crafty poem.10+++

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Nosheen Irfan 16 September 2018

This poem shows how peaceful the transition from one season to another is. That's how we should take change, calmly n peacefully. Autumn coming quietly, and Whitman's poetry, i'm sure you r having a great time. Sometimes everything seems to fall in place. A sense of peace prevails through the poem that is very infectious.

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Glen Kappy 12 September 2018

Hey, Daniel! Reading this poem I realize how I enjoy your musings and the spirit I’ve come to know that animates them. Hoping this finds you well, Glen

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