Monday, July 1, 2013

The First Dot Comments

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On the paper the first dot
It doesn’t know, cannot,
It really has no inkling,
What would become of your thought
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 03 July 2013

A great poem on a unique theme! Yes the first dot on the paper can never guess, what brews in inner recess!

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Paul Brookes 03 July 2013

That first dot is the starting gun A good poem about the poet I start thinking one thing then the poem takes over has a life of its own ends up changed. 10/10 BB =: OD

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2013

Intriguing where that first dot may lead. Very imaginative write.

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Dinesan Madathil 01 July 2013

A poem that speaks of your imaginative splutter sir. Keep writing..

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Dinesan Madathil 01 July 2013

A powerful write indeed! A piece of truth wrapped in fine diction sir!

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