The First Dawn Comments

Genesis! that dawn was so peaceful and harmonious untill they ate the forbidden fruit under a vulpine trick of a serpent.. Magnificient write....

Tres bien! Fantastic write! Deep and touching piece that clearly shows your great poetic talent! A well deserved 10+++ I can't give you more for this thought provoking write because this is the highest it goes! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...