The First And Last Time Comments

Wow! Pain of love is intense when not returned, but your heart was large enough to love and let go! Good friends are also hard to find, it seems you have found a true one, as she has told you the truth of how she feels. Honesty and truthfulness are the hallmarks of any type of relationship. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A lot undergo the same feeling. You're right. You do not have to be sad. You can look back to the experience as part of life.

A good piece. Thanks for sharing.

the pain of love is more difficult to erase....and you are trying to hide the pain....let's hope your friend will understand you and your dream Will come true.... »so close«

The ability to write down exactly what you feel is what makes a poem powerful and I think you have succeeded.

beautiful poem..i've been through this situation...: (

i think u r lost in love...coz i could see the feel in ur lines...pain in ur words..anywyz if not..its a compliment that u could bring feel in ur words..

Hi..this poem is lovely to read..the first and last time..so good a poem you wrote, i like it.. Don’t worry about me, I will not be sad Instead I will cherish the moments were together it's the part that i like the most in this poem..its so lovely :)

Your words take me to my first memory. Keep up the work.

makes sense to me. in life when you meet the person that really brings out your personality they never seem to stay verry long. but rember life is just a long goodbye

very nice poem.........thanks

You're a great writer! Keep it up.

real love is letting go of someone you can never have, and your time will come later, the right girl will come walking to you

Amazing Sir, I can say more organized, ten times better than myself, if only I could write the happiness of love.

sounds so real...keep it up!

This poem was worth a second read...see previous comment I made awhile back... Unrequited love is a very difficult experience to feel...but your heart is real and letting your angel go was a very generous display of real love as love cannot be chained nor caged. Keeping your memories in your heart will not hurt your future beloved as we learn always from our first time tasting the bittersweet essence of 'true' love! Nice poem young man...

Sweet. Calling her your guardian angel reminds me of what one of my boyfriends called me when my parents had me break up with him. (We were 16 and 17 and it was hard.) Hopefully the speaker does always truly love her enough to desire her happiness even if at the expense of his.

the idol of sacrifice is to be shared.avery nice and deep humane feelings. u like to catch the moment of being the victim. very nice write. thanks for asking to share.

Unconditional love outspoken. Always welcome it. Thanks for sharing.

i really enjoyed reading this poem! you have a gift with words! they really flow off the page!