Thursday, July 31, 2008

The Fire Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wordless he stutters, and meaningless, mutters
Crossed thoughts incoherently wrong.
Tonge-tied and spell-bound feeling his heart pound,
Sensations, familiar and strong.
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Fay Slimm
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Ivor Hogg 17 September 2008

A love lorn swain plucking up his courage to approach the object of his passion. I picture a potty acned youth enamoured of the class beauty

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Arabian Heart 09 August 2008

a fire that i know not physically but emotionally such a fiery substance you write with a flame a fire of passion please teach me more

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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