Wednesday, June 24, 2020

The Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breaking the clutches of modalities
lusty fire blazes up
flashing out flames.
The charming hot glare kindles
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2024

Wonderful poetic expressions and images depicting a journey and lesson in life. A meaningful poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 July 2020

to exploreaexplore them towards their doom. Well written.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2020

moth on the fire! quite imagery, this poem, I think, ironical and allegorical about life!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 June 2020

A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. Sometimes our desires and wants in life lure us into nothingness. Wonderfully crafted with superb imagery.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2020

A wonderful free verse on. Extremely well penned sir.................10/10

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 24 June 2020

poetically dramatised fine

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