The Finale Comments

I will 😘

I like your style so much, and your high imagination.! ! ! fantastic

Great and imaginative imagery...the Magician and the grand finale... Keep writing Naseer

Very deep thought..and very well narrated..and the hope you uprise..still I can imagine what have you written... A very seductive piece..truly marvelous!

deep...you have such talent describing the current invasions, the origin of natures disasters and most of all the belief by some that the sun will rise from the west due to the reversal of the earth...and GOD...so many things you touch upon but i've named a few...fantastic piece, thanx.

a pack up day is the wish to solve our panicridden phenomenon..... rgrds/salu

very nice poem i loved it u really have a way with words.u can play with them the way u want to create such inspiring poems.

God and human mess up in this magical poem, Naseer your talent is extraordinary.

such a great poem, heart touching. BEAUTIFUL.... made me inspirate... ''the finale'' it's wonderful! ! i'll give you a million out of ten! ! great job!

what human? what God? It instigate many thought to just by reading this.. beautiful..

great and clever appeal to God's power...the greatest magician...but done from heart for the love of others....your piece is the voice of the nation hopeless on what's happening now... interesting...God will do it in due time.....on 'The Finale' great write Naseer...please do read my 'Voice of the Innocents' also an appeal to the greatest magician......thanks for your comments in my works... 10++++ for you....

Anticipating the apocalypse.....is it! When it so becomes, its nothing than a magician best trick, ....a good write!

There is a very fine Italian novel of the beginning of the twentieth century called 'Zeno's Conscience' by Italo Svevo (it was a pseudonym) . I checked an English translation is available, I promise to the author of this poem an amazing reading of that issue. However regards to this author who reminded me of my great fellow countryman novelist.

A well penned poem in a heroic mood seeking justice from the Almighty. CP

That is a work of true excitement....well penned and alive!

A real pleasure to read this poem.

Let the Great Magician come and reedem us! It is a nice poem with a good analogy. NIce to read. THank you for sharing it

Exploding with expectation! Keep writing.

Interesting poem Naseer, one to read again, 10 Lynda xx

I like the theme but not the feeling of despair. Perhaps the Creator expects us to clean up our own mess for the sake of future generations.