The Finale Comments
Between my hearse and my coffin
Layed to rest, buried, laying still
Eyes closed, makeup perfected
No remorse, a finale-the corpse
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Very good... Flowing But don't be sure yet, you come to find this.....
Goodness. I've never heard death written this way. It's a beautiful depiction of it. not as in pretty sight but the words were perfect. Awesome job.
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8/9/2025 12:37:55 PM # 1.0.0
i love the title and the way you portrayed death. perfect poem Athena