Monday, November 24, 2008

The Final Word Comments

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while looking up at the stars in the sky
i saw a light flicker by.
i jumped up startled as to what it could be
so i searched the sky very slowly.
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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2008

GOD told Adam & Eve to tend the garden. WAR the first one was Cain killing his brother Abel. It all just grew with more people

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Linda Winchell 25 November 2008

I know our God sees all the thirst, hunger and pain and with His tears brings earths cleansing rain. To clean the earth and sky above so that mankind can see, all of God's love. Ten on your poem! God Bless, Linda

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Love the ending this is so nice. great job Krista

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