Friday, January 30, 2009

The Final Separation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the slow but certain
perfusion of
drip, drip, drip
through
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Apothecary Montague 16 October 2009

great rythm, perfectly worded. is this the price we pay?

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Diana Van Den Berg 21 February 2009

Powerful, Sue, but achingly sad.

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Lee Crowell 01 February 2009

depressing depressing depressing but very nice oh yeah, did I forget to mention depressing? check out my poem 'just to know you' and then if you want to let me add to your depression you might like 'nowhere to run' and 'after the tragedy'

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Sue Stone

Sue Stone

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