Monday, July 9, 2007

The Final Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

My soul is darken by your way
The nights I have laid awake and prayed
Hoping someday
Somehow you could be saved
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Patricia Gale
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Charles M Moore 14 July 2007

Graphic and caring poem, difficult to save everybody all we can do is pass on our thoughts which you have done here so eloquently.

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Original Unknown Girl 10 July 2007

Wow Patricia, this is so powerful, it is so hard sometimes for friends in love to see the light, I hope yours does, this message is universal though, it resonates deeply. Great write! HG: -) xx

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My first poem of the day and boy I chose well :) . A tenderly written piece of warning for a friend being badly treated... how eloquent. Caring, considerate and insightful. t x

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