Friday, October 23, 2009
The Final Goodbye Comments
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Torn between sadness and happiness
Don't know what I should do know
Pushing as I can to break her forces
A lifetime dreaming, goes to a flow
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Ying Escalona
23 October 2009
nice piece darlric...but if you kill yourself at this moment....that would be the last murder you make.....better go to a lake, pick a stone and throw it in then watch the ripples dissipate.
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7/23/2025 6:55:52 PM # 1.0.0
Such a poignant piece shared in a fantastic break of rhymes!