Thursday, June 11, 2009

The Final Goodbye Comments

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My feelings still hold onto you,
Your fingers remove from my grip,
I never learnt to love you
But I love you,
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Isunge Mwangase
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Lubinda Lubinda 28 September 2015

Nice poem, thanx for sharing!

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Will Reilly 11 June 2009

agreed, last two line are great!

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Shagun Khera 11 June 2009

the last two lines are a killer...perfect ending..

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Nik Ahmad Fariq 11 June 2009

quite sad.. good one! keep writing!

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