Friday, February 21, 2014

The Final Escape Comments

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‘There’s something amiss with you today,
There’s something that isn’t right,
I heard you weep in your fitful sleep
As you tossed and turned all night,
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David Lewis Paget
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 March 2014

A beautiful and very touching write about loss of a child and the effects grief has on a relationship. Written so naturally yet with strong and gripping emotions of both conflict and sadness, and a final resolve to start over again and keep love alive, Superb piece as always David.

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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