Thursday, January 26, 2012

The Final Call Comments

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If all this was illusion
If all this was confusion
If I had been the one ruling the day
This infinity could end
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Pragya Jain
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Deep Mukherjee 05 February 2012

it is a beautiful piece of poem; and expressions are beautifully expressed! ! !

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Sun And Moon 27 January 2012

Thank you guys :) Well, sometimes complications make things worthwile :) But I'll try to use simpler language next time..Thanks anyway :)

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Subodh Pandey 26 January 2012

nice write. poem has got a good rhythm and rhyme in it.

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Subodh Pandey 26 January 2012

nice write. poem has got a good rhythm and rhyme in it.

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Sagar Shelar 26 January 2012

Nice poem. Poem is little complecated.

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