Wednesday, July 16, 2008

The Final Battle Comments

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You’ve steered me wrong, ‘O devil within
Seductress of evil, temptress of sin
From the moment I exited the womb
Till today when I enter the tomb
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Joey Mann
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Ron Flowers 16 July 2008

A really good write. I read it as a war with oneself. Ron

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This was a really AWSOME poem....I guess this is what it's like to have someone have complete control over you......Beautiful write...... <3Payyton

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