Thursday, February 26, 2009

The Final Battle Comments

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The sword hit like a strike of lighting
Wonded yet strong
Push on through
Fighting all who come along
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Xanadu Trevino
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Anthony Williams 17 June 2009

i like the theme of the mid evil times, i found a deep meaning to the poem. The metaphor i got from it is that in life you never back down and stay strong. The fact that you showed it instead of telling it was great.

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