Wednesday, October 27, 2010

The Final And Fresh Sun Comments

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The sun calls back of its rays,
And ready to go far behind,
Birds and cattle are on their ways,
To reach their home before day truns blind.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Muhammad You nailed this piece of poetry

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Elena Sandu 01 November 2011

This is a beautiful written poem, enjoyed the ride, thank you for share.

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Ata Ata 20 December 2010

The beautiful picture of sun, so rich in vocabulary that let me feel this poem so deeply.

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Amy Marie 19 December 2010

Pretty good poem :) I like that it's about the sun setting.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 October 2010

Captivating, enthralling, enchantin- All adjectives are suitable for the poem. Well composed.

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

Bahraich, India
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