The Filthy Rich Window Shopper Comments
My phone vibrates, my hearts on dagger tips
Dagger to my heart, The name isn’t yours
Its Killing me, Single is still your status
Single is also mine, Window shopping
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Very innovative...great imagination here! Upbeat to the modern world of writers...10+++
You did a good job in writing your introspection, but something to observe your meter with your poetic format (shorten some stanza) , and needs to be careful to address the noun..god should be God...it should starts with capital letter...its a good start..keep on writing....
I read both of your poems. I like how your mind and heart can speak through your soul. I love that you can put that out on paper. Writing is a gift that sometimes is all we have. You can do that. It's yours and will always be there for you. I'm glad you shared with me. You are welcome to read me too. Deborah Cromer
very touching and a nice flow. with it, good to read...10.. nice work
beautiful composition on window shopping..looking for a lover is like a window shopping, ..beautiful poem..nice to read..grace
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9/9/2025 11:05:41 PM # 1.0.0
Innovatively intensive. Well done my friend.