Monday, September 29, 2008

The Figure On The Bus Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I stood awaiting, Anticipating
Who the figure was,
The bus came closer,
The figure grew clearer, like a Polaroid picture
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Sinead Hewson
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J T 02 October 2008

nice poem. I like how its structured and i love how i can picture exactly whats happening without even trying.

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Viola Grey 30 September 2008

I love the narrative in this...it's a wonderfull read....great work

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David Threadgold 29 September 2008

A very touching and romantic piece. well done. Regards Dave T

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