Monday, May 5, 2008

The Figure Comments

Rating: 5.0

He held a candlestick,
He lit it with splintered pine,
Once an invisible figure,
Now a figure with an outline.
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Rebecca Mummery
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Xfulgrimx Foulkes 09 August 2008

i love the sense of foreboding and almost trespassing secretive creeping feeling that accompanies this poem ^^

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Stone Granite 05 May 2008

The price for the will to find logic was greater, Greater than any diamond ring, The intent behind the cause was less, Now a puppet without the string. I love this verse! ! The entire poem is very well done. Stone

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This poem describes very well a male figure, not certainly a fabolous figure. A boring and pedantic guy. Who, moreover, conveys a feeling of flimsiness.

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