Tuesday, September 11, 2007

The Fight Of Twilight Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky was mid-night black,
They were ready to attack,

Their eyes blazed like the roaring sun,
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Kezune Walker
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Dean Hope 18 January 2008

i love it.. someone who ryhmes like me.. thank you

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Rommel Filoteo 18 December 2007

I like your poem so much! An extraordinaire that I could read over & over again! thanks for sharing!

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Kee Thampi 18 September 2007

a bud of new talent The Rain was tumbling like their tears, But nothing could save them from their fears, The thoughts of defeat was their flaw, To fight to the death was the law,

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