The Fifth Star Comments

very unique one from you and definitely thought-provoking

each of your poem sets its own benchmark surpassed by the next. this one would remain engraved in my heart.

Your poems never fail the needs of others But if I was your King I know what I'd try, That fifth wish, that so stands out from it's brothers, 'Let Lora's heart and soul find their rest And in God's arms build a nest, ' That alone would be my only cry!