Wednesday, July 8, 2009

The Fiery Globe Comments

Rating: 5.0

He awoke at night holding her tight
In cold air beneath a clear sky
He could not sleep and held her deep
For hours in warmth as lovers lie.
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Red Talgarth
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Josh Alfred 31 January 2018

I like the imagery and the romantic theme in this poem. Kudos.

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Paul Hansford 19 July 2009

A well structured piece, I'd have liked it to go on a little longer.

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Beautiful Sunrise of expectations a ten from me! ! !

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Black Mendilouche 08 July 2009

I'll always love that poem - so redolent with what might or should have been x

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