Wednesday, October 10, 2007

The Fields I Strolled Upon... Comments

Rating: 3.1

Everyday I strolled through the fields
When My day was done
I went there to have solitude,
After the day's joy, sorrow and fun...
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Baidurya Mukherjee
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Subbaraman N V 12 December 2007

Love, enjoy and live with nature! Nature is Godly and blesses all those who worship her- even strolling is worship of nature!

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David Harris 02 December 2007

Baidurya, there is a freshness in this poem you only get through innocent eyes. Wonderful poem and like everyone else has said you must keep writing as you have a great talent for it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Marilyn Lott 10 October 2007

A child enjoying the wonders of nature. Very nice! I enjoy writing about fields. Something very fresh and special about them. Keep writing and sharing your work. Marilyn

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