Everyday I strolled through the fields
When My day was done
I went there to have solitude,
After the day's joy, sorrow and fun...
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Baidurya, there is a freshness in this poem you only get through innocent eyes. Wonderful poem and like everyone else has said you must keep writing as you have a great talent for it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
A child enjoying the wonders of nature. Very nice! I enjoy writing about fields. Something very fresh and special about them. Keep writing and sharing your work. Marilyn
Love, enjoy and live with nature! Nature is Godly and blesses all those who worship her- even strolling is worship of nature!