Tuesday, December 23, 2008

The Few Who Did Not, Knew Comments

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'...and when they decided to remain themselves.
Keeping things the same and expecting it.
Deeper into darkness they went.
Expecting gifts to quickly unwrap.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Shyam Balaji 23 December 2008

WOW! ! ! >...wot a poem....ITS SUPERB! ! ! >....very different thinking...has all essence of a poetry...ur GR8! ! ! >.....found a different touch of imagery in ur poem...liked it much....i give u 10...KEEP WRITING! ! ! >>>..good luck! ! .. pls read ma poems and comment on them..! ! ! am just a starter to writing field...help me...thanks for sharing...bye.! !

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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