Monday, July 24, 2006

The Feud Comments

Rating: 5.0

The seasons argued late one night,
On who would be the best,
They fought for hours just to be,
The one above the rest.
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Lee McVicar
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Francesca Johnson 24 July 2006

I liked this one, too, Lee. But I thought there could have been more of an argument/debate between all the seasons before the finale. Good though, wonderful idea. Love, Fran xx

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Preeti - is here! 24 July 2006

What a teriffic concept for a poem! I love it! And i like winters too, especially cuddling up under a blanket and sleepign for hours on end, . hehe Preets

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Nice imaginary fued Lee, liked the poem even though i don, t like winter.

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