The Ferris Wheel (3) Comments

Sylvia, this is magnificent poem and series. It reminds me that all the turns over the course of a lifetime can, in microcosm, impact our daily lives. If only we stepped back and examined how much transpires in a day, we may be jolted. And I remember well the Ferris Wheel from my youth. There was always a sensation that indeed time zones were being crossed as the wheel made its rotations. A perfect 10 and to myfavourites.

FERRIS WHEEL brings a clear afternoon after the morning goes away passing through the day. The upcoming night talks about calmness and tomorrow's light. When the cheese is no more choco cream will favour the will. An amazing perceptional poem is very beautifully penned...10