Wednesday, August 1, 2012

The Fence Of Fire! Comments

Rating: 3.5

Without rubbing of stones, gas and current,
A spark at the mind, thus small flame at the heart,
The big fire in the thought, inferno body,
Hot abuse words and violent razing actions.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Captain Cur 02 August 2012

I am smiling reading this. After let us say a firey poem, I like to write a cool down poem. It maintains emotional equilibrium. The trouble with rash individuals, they lack this balance and fall into the trap of real violence to satisfy their emtional turmoil. Thoughtful poem.

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