The Female Flower Comments

this lovely poem will put a lot of people off plucking flowers. I will certainly think twice before I do it as you have so rightly compared it to an innocent girl. this comparison is very well weaved in your poem. Thank you sir.

This is an amazing write! Before such an earnest plea of the flower, who cannot yield! I am sure you didn't have the heart to pluck her and place her in your beloved's hair ! (10)

Your imaginations are always fantastic...I like the way you have used and related it to reality in this flower and girl poem...thank you

I looked at the hair clip/in my sweet heart's silky hairs/fighting with winds/that like the shining hairs attempting again and again/to touch the rosy cheeks……..Liked the beautiful poetic expression! An elegant poem!

Amazing rendering Akhtarji...beautiful comparison of flower with a girl.. Liked very much, +++10